Go Lady Raiders!!!
How about the coach's first name in the second graph. Not everyone knows her first name. Also, is this the first-ever title or the first ever one at that score? Re-read that sentence. Otherwise, good job. John Kryger (Class of 1960 and former Crow's Nest managing editor, retired reporter and copy editor with the Journal News, Rockland/Westchester)
John, thank you for taking time out of your day to comment on this article. We especially appreciate comments from a professional in the journalistic field. Those were good catches that we missed--we will be wary of misleading errors like that in the future. Thanks again, Editors-in-Chief Jennifer Pierce and Nicholas Scotti